Overall, your notes sheet is really beneficial and visually appealing. You used color very well throughout your note sheet. The title with the purple background was very eye catching and a great way to start off the notes. I really like how you added the stroke order for 一下. I also like how you added the culture alert that had to do with this specific phrase. I wasn’t sure what was going on with the blank section in the notes box, it was very big and plain. Also, one more thing, the word box should be a little bigger because under “use:” when you said: “modified the verb to make a statement more polite” the word polite was wrapped around to the next line so you couldn’t see it and the sentence didn’t make sense by saying “modified the verb to make a statement more.” Overall, very nice job and its very clear to read!! :)
Brycesite's comments:
Very extensive information and visually appealing project. It was a little hard to read some of the notes in the word boxes because they were too small. I'm not totally sure but I think that you forgot to put a conclusion.(???) I also would have to see that you used more of the textbook to gain even more information. Otherwise you did a great job.
Lei-Rui-Ni's comments:
Overall, your notes sheet is really beneficial and visually appealing. You used color very well throughout your note sheet. The title with the purple background was very eye catching and a great way to start off the notes. I really like how you added the stroke order for 一下. I also like how you added the culture alert that had to do with this specific phrase. I wasn’t sure what was going on with the blank section in the notes box, it was very big and plain. Also, one more thing, the word box should be a little bigger because under “use:” when you said: “modified the verb to make a statement more polite” the word polite was wrapped around to the next line so you couldn’t see it and the sentence didn’t make sense by saying “modified the verb to make a statement more.” Overall, very nice job and its very clear to read!! :)Brycesite's comments:
Very extensive information and visually appealing project. It was a little hard to read some of the notes in the word boxes because they were too small. I'm not totally sure but I think that you forgot to put a conclusion.(???) I also would have to see that you used more of the textbook to gain even more information. Otherwise you did a great job.